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The Good, the Bad and the Wasteful

C herish Y our T ime, A dolescence Y earned. H ope O ur E nergy, D isillusions E arned. I nnocence U pheld, E very U nification A djourned. L ustful T houghts, N o L ove R eturned. D evoted H earts S trengthen, T earfully S purned .

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Date: 4/6/2009 3:21:00 AM
Wow!! Now thats got to top all acrostics I've ever seen, very clever your words work in both directions! You must have put much time and effort into getting this one right? I'm in awe at such talent! Well done, and thanks for commenting my writes! Happy Easter, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:08:00 PM
incredibly creative! Pawlu, nice acrostic, Jim
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:39:00 AM
wow this is great,how did you manage to do it?bravo -charma
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