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The Gone Boy

How long did it take you to decide To end your life To commit suicide. Was it the father who left you in mind or was it your mother you hated Or perhaps you knew she hated you as much. Was it that lost love that you thought you had Perhaps fear that she leave you as such. That your life did not matter was the mistake you made. My dear boy, come back to us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 3:28:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Sarah. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2009 2:49:00 PM
suicide sure can be a saddening experience for others, good poem
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Date: 9/16/2009 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/16/2009 9:37:00 AM
This has to be on of the worst situations for all who touched on the this young man's life. I am truly sorrow for you and your family. Sara
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Date: 9/16/2009 9:27:00 AM
wrenching...sad and lost.
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