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The Golden Sands of Love

On the golden sands We share each other As we make love With natures scent from the water Our two souls unite Recipe of natures scents mix Birds start to sing Fish leaping to view and rejoice Clouds bowing Waves lap the shore With a tenderness of applause Reeds chatter on the dunes Driftwood our audience As all around a gentle breeze Whistles a rhapsody http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love2.php

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2009 1:19:00 PM

Love the picture represented here. The color golden sand beautiful which means the sky must be golden also. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/4/2009 3:03:00 AM

i love the golden sands of love-and in Malta we have that too-we have a place called Golden sands and its beautiful Captan-yhis write is full of passion,passion on golden sands-beautiful write--charma

Patricia Prescott

Date: 6/29/2009 7:23:00 PM

Ah , images of moments past, beautiful writing, I enjoyed this. Thank you for your comments....Patricia

Daver Austin

Date: 6/29/2009 12:03:00 PM

I think of the dunes up around Travers City in Michigan. Wherever, a lovely love-making day, lovely poem. daver

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/29/2009 10:24:00 AM

Lovely! I applaud you on this romantic and soft piece of poetry friend.

Melody Coster

Date: 6/28/2009 2:02:00 PM

Greetings James. What a great write, I actually witnesses this scene with my minds eye. I now have a question to ask if you don't mind.Could you please tell me which way this line should read within the context of a poem I am working on. "l listened with my heart instead of with my head" or "I listened with my head instead of with my heart" I can't decied which one sounds better. I could sure use your thoughts on this one. I shall then submit it. Thanks, Melody?

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/28/2009 12:13:00 PM

A gentle and very vivid poem. Lovely atmosphere and lovely images. Well done. Regards Heidie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 10:00:00 AM

Lovely images that make me think of the Caribbean Islands, especially the video for Jason Mraz's "I'm Lucky" with Colbie Caillat. You make me long for a vacation with a special guy! Love you! Carolyn