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The Girl Who Will Always Be Red

A knife cuts open her heart the blood flow ceases to start a rare thing is life with this idea she continues to strive. In this world of evil she is lost it overwhelms her the pain, the exhaust. Her eyes are stained red into a trap she was led unable to escape, she was morphed into another shape. Her body shakes as if she will soon break she will never come back her heart she will always lack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/2/2016 12:34:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Emily. LINDA
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:13:00 AM
Wonderful poem ... dark and broody just the way I like them glad i went through the featured poems this week Ive found some Gems ... congrates ... love Jayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:03:00 AM
EMILY, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:19:00 PM
congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Emily...P.D.
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:45:00 AM
Very glad am I to have stopped by the Features this week, so much beauty and inspiration! This piece was very powerful, I connected with the emotions here, and understood them. Congratulations on your feature, may there be more for you! Amazing piece, keep that pen going :). This on I am adding to my Faves! --Madison
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Emily. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Emily. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:35:00 AM
Hi Emily: Wow!!! What an emotional and powerful poem. I really enjoyed your reference to morphing. Have a great day. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:04:00 AM
So sad
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Date: 9/20/2010 8:08:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write ... hope your time on soup will be fun... check out the contest scene to enter..with luv...
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:49:00 AM
Love heals as much as it wounds, my love. Wait and see. Welcome to poetrysoup, beautiful poem. Drop by sometime
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:52:00 PM
very sad and touching..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:17:00 PM
a deep cut in life Emily, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:10:00 PM
sad write on this Sunday the lord's day...Hope you have a good week and if you dare stop by and read my works...I need a new victim. ;)
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