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The Girl I Seen On the Beach

My day started With a walk on the sands As my wish comes true To grace these American lands As i soak up the heat That rains down on thee Some one catches my eye As i look up and see The bronzed tan Of a maiden so fair Pleats of gold As i politely stare She exits the water Now with towel in hand A sight to behold For many a man To watch her rhythm Hips dancing My heart flutters Like horses prancing Her body to me Sheer ecstasy Curved and cute This beautiful look Bikini clad girl In colour's of delight Her body carries Shapely and right As this Highlander Lost for speech Will always remember The girl he seen on the beach http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

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Erica Buckner

Date: 6/26/2009 10:53:00 AM

wow this is really good =] thanks for reading my poems and commenting

Miranda Agnes Quainoo

Date: 6/24/2009 3:41:00 AM

Wow,very sweet and lovely.one thing i have learnt from you is that you find beautiful people at the beach

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/21/2009 2:47:00 AM

James, I'm glad you wrote this poem. Before I was obese, I used to walk on the beach. I hated all of the stares and whistles. Now, from your heart, I find relief that they were not all lust. THANK YOU! I'm going to close, noe, and write a beach story of a different flavor... The Three Bares. It's a true story, too. Be Back Soon. Lovingly, Dane

Zoe Lambert

Date: 6/20/2009 11:21:00 PM

AWWWWW!!!! This is lovely......Thats why u are my favourite!!!.........This girl must have been nicer than Venus....Damn U make me feel Jealous of her!!!..............Brialliant buddy! Simple yet sophisticatin'......> Crystal

Jim Fish

Date: 6/20/2009 5:42:00 PM

I like! Reminds me of some similar memories. You have a way of reaching into the mind and titilating the romantic and addressing lust so politely. Thank you... <><

Daver Austin

Date: 6/20/2009 1:46:00 PM

I got excited just reading this poem,James. I want you to know I wear a pace maker. Agghhh! This is it, Elizabeth! daver

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/20/2009 1:13:00 PM

Love this one James<33 I always fynd Them on the beach too=) Hott muscular bods gone for a swim and a time for Me to show my stuff.. If i have any :s Terrif Write

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2009 1:11:00 PM

What a romantic image you paint of this girl carrying her towel. "My heart flutters" as I read your sweet words. She's waiting for you on the sand; go to her now and watch the rhythm in her eyes dance! Love, Carolyn