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The Gift: Rebirth

THE GIFT: REBIRTH Oh God, my Dearest God... clothed me fine with your love divine upon magma pits that hid me Oh God, my Dearest God... take me, save me... Save me! My life gnarled old like cathedral trunks deep rooted under brown solid soil ground. Branching trials somehow coiled and pinned me down.. So as dark cyclopean sins fog me; shuddering my peace and sane. Oh God, my Dearest God how calm, oh so calm, you came. How quiet, oh so quiet you cared How gently, oh so gently, You cushioned me Lovingly, oh so lovingly, YOu rescued me. Tumbling twixt to pillars of dawn and twilight Oh God, my Dearest God With You, threading mountain to mountain of woes, lead me to harvest free to orchard gifts of wisdom, hope and strength even to crystal stairs of limitless amber wonder, You let me experience to pursue these borders. Oh God, my Dearest God... With our partnered walk icy drizzle of snowtalk melted gradually... Oh God, my Dearest God... By siblings of smiles and golden gestures You permitted me to have anew nurture. Oh God, my Dearest God allow me then to hymn a psalm let it be a humble hum of my gratitude to Your matchless charm. Barefoot, oh God, I will come baring all and bowing down. I will deliver my soulful cry that my aged misty life is gone And that, now is a present rainbow valley of rebirth.. © O. E. Guillermo 10:21 pm September 02, 2014 Sponsor Verlena S. Walker Contest Name The Gift Placed first.. :) to God be the glory.. Inspire by Biblical Verse: 2 Corinthians 5:17 Therefore if anyone is in Christ, he is a new creature; the old things passed away; behold, new things have come...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 8:31:00 PM

You are one of the most inspiring poets ...LINDA

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/29/2014 1:12:00 PM

I give you 7 with in the limit fixed. Actually, it's more than 7 i feel. Perhaps you have heard it nicely. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 7:09:00 AM

thanks much.. God bless.. :)

Sarita Brewer

Date: 10/17/2014 12:18:00 PM

This poem is very deep and inspirational. It feeds the spirit... God bless you ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/18/2014 7:00:00 AM

yes it mist be.. :) thanks much for the drop by.. :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2014 8:25:00 AM

I love that one so young has been gifted with so much wisdom. Congratulations, you are truly special. God is good.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:45:00 AM

We are all special in God's eyes..:) GBU thanks much..:)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/11/2014 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations Olive... You placed high girlfriend. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:44:00 AM

Thanks much..:) your contest has been inspiring..:) it did catch my attention..:) to God be the greatest glory..:)

Keith Merritt

Date: 9/11/2014 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations, Olive ! It made the start of my day a good one to see you win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:42:00 AM

Thanks much Keith..:)

Theresa Stephens

Date: 9/11/2014 8:59:00 AM

Hi, A worthy first place win. Congratulations on your spiritual poem. Regards Theresa xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:41:00 AM

Thanks much Theresa..:)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/11/2014 5:46:00 AM

Wow! A very divine and deep piece; congrats Olive! ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:40:00 AM

Thanks much teddy :) GBU to God be the glory::)

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/10/2014 9:53:00 PM

Awesome verse Olive, I loved it very much. Congratulations on your top place

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:21:00 AM

I love that verse too..:) GBU and thanks..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2014 7:18:00 PM

Hi Olive, Congratulations, on your awesome, sweet wonderful win. God Bless, Love LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:19:00 AM

Thank you Lollie Linda..:) GBU

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/10/2014 7:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Olive. The hunger of your spirit comes through beautifully.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Faye..:) and kudos too..:)

John Posey

Date: 9/10/2014 4:18:00 PM

Olive dearest. What a beautiful harvesting from one of the most inspiring verses in the Holy Word. you are truly gifted..... Love Ya...... Jake

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2014 3:25:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!! This is truly a deserved win! Confirms my initial judgment. Ice-cream & strawberries for a treat:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 2:08:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..:) I appreciate it..:) GBU like the strawberry treat..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2014 2:58:00 PM

Many congrats Olive on this beautiful piece:-) Hugs jan x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Jan..:)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/10/2014 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations Olive. Beautifully written verse of the greatest love we could have.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:15:00 AM

Thanks much Brenda..:) I appreciate it..:) gbu

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2014 11:50:00 AM

Congrats on the top place win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/12/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thanks much Dr. Ram .:) GBU

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/10/2014 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations, Olive, on a magnificent win! Excellent write! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/12/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thanks much Pandita..:) appreciate it..:)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/10/2014 10:42:00 AM

WOW... this is simply amazing. I love it - Congratulations on your winning poem. Love and prayers, Gina

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/12/2014 7:11:00 AM

thanks much Regina..:) appreciate it GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 9/5/2014 4:55:00 PM

Excellent, Olive_eloi!! This is one great poem expressed deeply with love and conviction. You describe your rebirth as such an enriching experience. Perhaps it is how it has been presented to you that makes it appear so beautiful...who knows, maybe you had it all before and did not realize!:) Take care and good luck. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/5/2014 7:32:00 PM

Yes maybe Paul I had it all but I seem sometimes confused or too busy to fathom that it's already present.. And yes it is just lately I have become so intimately knocked to know and acknowledge this..:) hence I'm really so grateful ... I really wish I can do more.... You know

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/2/2014 9:06:00 PM

Wow! I am smiling real big at the love textured in your poem. You're amazing girl :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/5/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks much Casarah..:) I appreciate your comment..:)