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The Gift of Life

The Gift Of Life T o those who tremble at the thought H eed these words that life has wrought- E njoy your blessings God has woven G ive them freely to one you've chosen- I n time the burning bush reveals F orever love your gift appeals, T ranscending time your heirs will know, O f battles, floods, your heart endured F orever etched in tears love cured L ost not in time your path was true, I n His Hands He shaped your hue- F or let the mountains, valleys crie! E ternal joy be yours on high! *** For Carol's Contest "The Birds And The Bees"

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Date: 9/10/2010 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for entering your The Gift Of Life poem in my contest James. It is an amazing poem and I congratulate you on your win. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:55:00 AM
Unique and filled with both tears and joy, Jimbo. Very nice! Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:37:00 AM
I hope you find MUCH JOY here and I know you do, both in nature and your family. Light & Love and congrad's
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:07:00 PM
Your message was perceptive and clear without having to mention the bird or the bee. Very inspirational write and so nice to see it in the winner's circle. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this acrostic, James. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:16:00 PM
Great story. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:57:00 PM
Well conceived and composed poem. Congratulations on the win, James
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:48:00 PM
nice one , congrats on your win
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations James on your tope ten winner poem in Carol's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:51:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your super win in Carol's contest... an excellent entry.enjoy your stupendous victory tonight my friend with luv..
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:52:00 PM
we can hope! Light & Love nice use of form! ;)
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:14:00 PM
great poem!
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Date: 8/13/2010 3:01:00 PM
very well done acrostic jimbo,with an inspirational tone and versed rhythm .....peace , jay
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:36:00 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck! Sara
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:52:00 PM
Wise words Jimbo in your Acrostic entry for Carol .. good luck ..u have captured the essence of your theme so well my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:11:00 PM
very lovely write,, this acrostic was beautiful , enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/12/2010 5:59:00 PM
A lovely piece of beauty and inspiration in this nicely composed and uplifting acrostic poem. Great write. Love and best wishes........Ravindra......James Marshall Goff
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Date: 8/12/2010 5:56:00 PM
Wonderful message...in a great acrostic poem! Uplifting and inspiring....Good luck James, this should be a winner, with such a winning message!! :)
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