The Gift

Let us not forget what Christmas is all about,its more than christmas presents and rushing all about,.To easily it is forgotten the price our Lord did pay so that you and I once more could be with him someday,so do not let the sun go down without giving him his due cause on this Christmas day God has sent a gift for you.

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Jezabella Singe

Date: 10/13/2011 10:51:00 AM

you never let others bring you to the bottom. the greatest thing you do is help the lost ones fly. great poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2011 9:05:00 AM

I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Zachary. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol