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The Giant's Dream Jars

In the centre of the silence, a giant fills the space He carries but a trumpet and a battered old suitcase I watched with baited breath, the street was dimly lit He puts the case upon the ground but holds on to his trumpet His monumental hands unscrew a tiny little jar The contents seemed to dance and swirl and glitter like the stars He tips the foggy matter into his blowing device Then pokes it through a window, I don't dare blink my eyes The dream that he has captured, collected, then released Now floating in the mind of the reciever as she sleeps The giant, big and friendly, satisfied his job complete Picks up his battered suitcase and moves on to the next street *I took inspiration from Roald Dahl's 'The BFG' book. 19th Jan 2012

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Date: 9/13/2017 11:31:00 PM
Oh this is so wonderful!! I just watched BFG on tv yesterday; Roald Dahl is one amazing writer. This poem is so perfect :)
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:19:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Jodie x
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:22:00 AM
skillfully crafted, jodie...congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 1/29/2012 3:42:00 PM
such a unique perspective, congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:20:00 AM
Thank you all for your very kind words xx
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry.
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Date: 1/28/2012 11:21:00 PM
Imagination working over time. Great entry and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:16:00 PM
aha, this must be DReam WEaver come to visit!! And he is a giant!! Very imaginative. Congrats on an awesome win!
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jodie. Well done
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:29:00 PM
Jodie congrats on your B ig F antastic G reat win, team Williams again eh..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:06:00 PM
congrats Jodie on a great second place win with this creation on jars luv..
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Date: 1/19/2012 5:20:00 PM
Very Good!
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