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A Paiute shaman named Wovoka hailed all the tribes across the nation. And announced himself the messiah visions backed his bold proclamation. Year eighteen ninety in Nevada they came to sing and learn the Ghost Dance. And hear of a new world prophecy that come spring will replace bow and lance. The earth will be covered with new soil burying the devils with white skins. And on that soil grows a sea of grass where restoration of hope begins. Herds of buffalo and wild horses will be resplendent in their return. And the ghosts of ancestors will come to replace all those who would not learn. Everyone who performs the Ghost Dance will be lifted high into the air. And they will stay there while earth's renewed safely removed from the white man’s lair. They'll be returned to the earth and all the recent dead will revive then. And women danced till they collapsed pleading for the return of their men. Every dancer wore a Ghost Dance shirt painted with symbols of great magic. And when told bullets couldn't pierce them this desperate last straw turned tragic. Written Aug.7, 2015

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Date: 3/19/2018 10:21:00 PM
Wow, love all this native imagery - tragic end though!
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Date: 3/20/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your comments and your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2015 8:30:00 AM
This is sad and haunting. You are a great story teller.
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Date: 8/8/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 12:43:00 PM
A beautiful write, it flow nice. Excellence.......A.M.
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Date: 8/8/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 12:07:00 PM
emile my friend....I know not where you learned of America's sins....but so much truth is what you provided....but the sad thing is that our "powers that be" still want to hide it.....
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Eric, as always I appreciate your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 10:19:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and story Emile - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2015 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always I appreciate your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 9:52:00 AM
tremendous imagery - well done.
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Bill, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 9:28:00 AM
very nice poem
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Diane, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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