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The Geisha - Walk Softly contest

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The Geisha - Walk Softly contest

I smile serenely and sit
waiting as my mentor taught
to please weary gentlemen
massaging egos.





Penned 11 August 2013

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/8/2013 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Morgan, thank you ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Congrats Seren, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/8/2013 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:57:00 PM
    congrats on your win! Good write :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/8/2013 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra, thans for stopping by ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Yes.......for what their softness is trained to do... Nicely done, Seren!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie. .....Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Debbie many thanks ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your win,great pal.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello O.A. Thanks for the congrats ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:47:00 PM
    lovely imagery, seren.. super congrats on your stunning win!..:) hugggs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nette. Thanks for your kind comment ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:59:00 AM
    I see we picked the same picture. I enjoyed reading yours. Congratulations.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great minds Richard.... Thanks for stopping by and your comment ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:41:00 AM
    Congrats on the win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ram for your comment ...Seren...
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:53:00 AM
    a lovely poem and win..Seren... xox..pd

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:05:00 PM
    I remember yours and how Much I liked it the first time I saw it. It was one of the first ones I saw in this contest and helped inspire me to want to try one too. Congrats, Seren and thanks for your fun birthday wish.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea thanks for the congrats ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Congratulations sass love xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/6/2013 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy...hugs...Seren
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:02:00 PM
    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/6/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/6/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Sarah
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:43:00 PM
    Very nice, my ego is a wee bit sore! :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:18:00 AM
    This is super good, Seren!!! One of the best I've seen in this contest. Just say egos. It doesn't need the apostrophe. I hope Debs loves it!

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:46:00 PM
    This is a spellbinding write crafted by your illustrious pen! I really enjoyed reading this perfect poem this evening! You will do wonderfully in the contest, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wish Russell, so many better poets in the room....Seren
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Thank you Seren, for that lovely piece, very nicely written....Peter

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Peter...Seren
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Yes I agree with Nette the "massaging ego's" is a wonderful ending to the poem.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:21:00 AM
    you wordplay brings me to another place and time, seren... you just amaze; i like the ego bit..:) huggs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Nette , I have my moments of inspiration lol...Seren
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