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The Garden In the Window

I invite you to my window, Where forks a path you may never go See that garden there bursting with blooms? It is yours, but you must only look, Sit in my boat, but please do not row It grabs holds and doesn't let go Great things happen outside that window The brownies there sing joyful medleys, Their allure entrancing and deadly. They whisper come, but I must say no And out there their world is aglow, Out there they only reap and never sow. Saw many a-sovereigns in flowing capes A stones throw away from dusty drapes It pains me that I may never go As you gaze outside my window Forging conniving plots utterly low Sure, you may break the glass and climb outside. But when you breathe in that garden ever-wide, Will it be what you hoped? As you gaze outside my window Longing for more than to watch the plants grow I bid you, please, to simple gape in awe. And take it for what it is; a silly law. Simply stay, Simply cope... NOTE: I originally wrote this for a "garden contest" that I stumbled upon. But now that I posted this the contest seems to have vanished :(

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Date: 6/11/2016 8:03:00 PM
Okay!! Another gem here, Timothy! These are absolutely stunning! "Sure, you may break the glass and climb outside.But when you breathe in that garden ever-wide,Will it be what you hoped?" Cool moment in this piece. When things are out of reach, it can be maddening! Perhaps the time is just not right--some places in our life we are just are not ready to explore, and for others it's just around the corner. This is a thoughtful, unique composition. Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/24/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. I'm not sure where these thoughts came from ... perhaps a title from a Stephen King short story that got my mind going: "Secret Garden, Secret Window" ... It gave me a sense of being trapped, yet knowing something wonderful was around the corner.
Date: 4/20/2013 4:50:00 PM
I sense something cryptic about this poem. I like it very much, but it leave me with a feeling of imprisonment. Maybe I should use it as a needed therapy (lol)..... Great job.... Jake
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/21/2013 12:24:00 AM
I see what you mean, about imprisonment. It's open for interpretation but for me it's about being able to view something so miraculous... and yet there's no way you can really experience it... just forced to look at it from a distance. Thanks for reading John!
Date: 3/26/2013 6:30:00 PM
I like this one. Well written. I really like the second stanza for some reason. You have talent. Keep writing!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2013 3:21:00 AM
You're very kind Dylan... thanks for checking me out :)
Date: 3/25/2013 6:10:00 AM
Very good read
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2013 3:21:00 AM
Thanks Matt!
Date: 3/24/2013 4:15:00 PM
hmmm, I wonder if the contest closed out, Timothy. sorry if you didn't make it in time. Your perspective on the theme was very unique and interesting. I wanted to tell you on that "see a penny pick it up, all the day you'll have good luck" that is a very common nursery rhyme or proverb, not sure which. You really never heard it before?
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2013 10:57:00 PM
Nope... lol, I guess I don't have a very extensive knowledge in nursery rhymes... no one ever told me of it's good luck charms! The weird thing about the contest is that I believe the due date still have a couple weeks on it (maybe the entry limit reached it's max)
Date: 3/24/2013 1:35:00 PM
Timothy; I hust love the poem. I'm sorry about the contest. do youknow who was running it? Thanks for the soupMail. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2013 10:55:00 PM
Nope I don't honestly remember... oh well it's no biggie! As long as at least a few people can read it and enjoy then I'm just fine with that :) Thanks for your visit Lucilla!
Date: 3/24/2013 12:52:00 PM
Too bad, it would have done well.
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Date: 3/24/2013 10:54:00 PM
Well at least it was an excuse to explore further and write on different subjects... contests for me are good ways to improve your writing. Forcing you to explore new ground, new topics, new styles of writing that you wouldn't normally do...

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