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The Game Of Life

The Game Of Life Life is a game and we are the players. We were delt some cards and we play the best way, we know how. How do we know if we win, or lose, when we are learning the game as we go along? It is not easy to play this game, when no instructions have been made. The game is not easy, but we hang in there - until one day the game is over and only than we will find out if we played the right cards, or if just lost in this game called LIFE...
02/21/2013 Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:43:00 PM
    It's like when we brought our newborn son home from the hospital and I jokingly asked my wife, 'where's the instruction manual?' If we live our lives by the Golden Rule I think we'll be OK. Well done Lucilla! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Hopefully we play the cards write and come out on top. You are damn well right that the game is not easy. This is a stimulaing poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Lucilla, I am happy to say that your poem has got a philosopical value! Extremely well done!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:46:00 AM
    Amazing write. Very true also. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:49:00 PM
    yes, so true, about that game that we ALL are forced to play!! Some lose and some win and some just go around past Boardwalk again and again and again!!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:08:00 AM
    .... some lose ..... and someone wins - TRUE! - Very well written, Lucilla! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:59:00 AM
    can be hard the game of life, yet makes for beautiful this is...

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:48:00 AM
    At 83 I'm still trying to figure it out. Good stuff, Lucilla. daver

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:50:00 AM
    Hi Lucilla yes and what a game it can be sometimes, hope to be a winner but doubt I will, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:22:00 PM
    Wow, this is a very powerful and amazing write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, quite the enlightening poem, Great Work!!