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The Gallants

Tall trees on each side of the deep wood's shadowed path guide me out. . . my gallant escorts. Submitted Oct. 7, 2022 for Line Gauthier's Bitesize Poem No.53 Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2022 3:41:00 PM

Nice tribute to the form, Andrea ~

Jesse Rowe

Date: 10/21/2022 3:22:00 AM

Love the imagery. I can almost see them as kingly soldiers saluting your passage with upright spears to the ground.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2011 11:07:00 AM

Beautiful ,cute Cinquain from you,Andrea---kash

Samir Georges

Date: 7/6/2010 5:03:00 PM

brilliant.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2010 4:53:00 PM

Winner material for sure..Good luck..I hope that the Knightly man safety brings you out to safety...Sara

David Byrne

Date: 7/6/2010 3:05:00 PM

great picture!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 9:31:00 AM

well high five for this cinquain Andrea!! haha oh I see Linda beat me to the high five haha oh well ;) double high fives then! This was such a cool cinquain (definitely have to look into this) I like how you seem so friendly with those gallant escorts of yours --wish you the best for this one! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 7:21:00 AM

of course... good luck..but I know its a winner.. luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 7:20:00 AM

High Fives to u my friend on this one .. a winner for sure in Brian's contest.. a great form to use too.. enjoyed reading as we prepare to just veg on the beach today.. tired .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..AlohA..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/6/2010 5:29:00 AM

Nice picture penned here, Andrea! "the deep wood shadowed path"! Excellent line! Wish you all of luck in Brian's contest and thank you for all your kind comments...Have a nice week...Love, Gert

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/5/2010 6:28:00 PM

Oh...yes....I love the beauty and elegance of this one!! Lovely, Andrea!! Good one for Brian's contest.....(a winner I'm sure of it!!)~ love Carrie

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/5/2010 6:05:00 PM

This ends strong and with panache on the ellipses. Nice work on your blog for Adeleke, Andrea. You have led a rather interesting Lifetime movie life, have you not? I would think so. Nice trribute! Regards, Gerard

Marie Harrison

Date: 7/5/2010 4:31:00 PM

Those noble wooden spires, leading you out. Vivid imagery.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/5/2010 1:55:00 PM

I need to gen up on the different forms of cinquain before I attempt this one. Loved your woodland version with those trees as 'gallant escorts' out of the dark. Best of luck in Brian's contest. ~ Sharon :) ps, not sure I'm upto too many comments tonight, check my blog if you get chance.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 12:52:00 PM

check your soupmail mom!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 12:12:00 PM

wonderful! playing in the woods can be lovely. mom, I wish you all the best in the contest.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2010 12:11:00 PM

Andrea, awesome entry, you tend to take the reader completely into a new world with your writes. All the best Btw how dare you call me a siren? Hehe :) you make me laugh hehe.. Was in two minds whether I should add that "hot summer's night" now I'm glad I did.. Thank you for your support, Luv Wilma

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/5/2010 11:23:00 AM

Good luck in Brian's "High Fives" Contest, Andrea! Love the imagery in this..brings to mind those giant red wood trees I've seen pics off. Hope you had a great July 4th!! Love, Audrey

Daver Austin

Date: 7/5/2010 8:50:00 AM

"Lions and tigers and bears, Oh, my!" You know I never enter the soup contests. Thanks for the pitch though. I like this woodsy write. Love, Dave

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/5/2010 8:22:00 AM

This is another treasure,always my pleasure. .Celene!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/5/2010 8:19:00 AM

Dear I changed my out of place line,haha!tnks for your constructive comment,i love your honesty swt friend. the dedication thing happened to me too. I wrote a poem to those who ever wrote for me,then i wished to add you ,Linda and Jimbo,three closest friends,Caroline waswith the dedic. Group,then i was feelin bad for nt adding Nikko.Deb and the list of friends,ws never ending!that is when i penned and to all my friends,they know who they are,lol!Your friendship is enough dedication for me,swt 1

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/5/2010 8:18:00 AM

A unique approach, Andrea, and I think this will score highly! Best wishes for the contest. Great use of imagery and I like thinking of the trees as "gallant escorts." I took an unusual perspective as well. Not sure what Brian is seeking. Love, Carolyn