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The Galactic Way

Galactic is our universe Enhanced by wonder lust Of stars that want to show their tails Before they turn to dust. Much like my sister and her mister Out to light the town In their galactic Lamborghini Loaded all around. And if they race like stars that hast To blind with their bright lights They might end up, a black hole stuck And that would serve them right. RETA PRUITT August 30, 2016 (For contest)

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Date: 9/4/2016 6:35:00 PM
I'd love to be carefree..... with no consequences though, great write Reta, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/31/2016 3:45:00 PM
Very funny Reta. I love your humor. Lamborghini huh? Impressive! LOL Thanks for the laugh.
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Date: 8/31/2016 7:49:00 PM
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Date: 8/31/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Daniel...I believe that everyone adds a little something to the soup...That's what makes it so good. Thanks again

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