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Author's Notes: "The Frozen Ghost" is a Rhymed Couplet I wrote to further celebrate the Halloween season for 2015. (In this write, I use the older traditional name for Halloween more seen in Great Britain and Europe, which is "All Hallows' Eve." I also used Old English verb inflections seen in the 16th century in this poem for a more classical flavor in line with the tenor of this write.) The theme of this couplet centers on an annual appearance of a Hell-born icy specter called "The Frozen Ghost" who comes to Earth every All Hallows' Eve to carry out the bidding of The Devil (or "Old Hob" in the poem--a nickname of The Devil from past centuries), in frightening people, spewing The Devil's message of fear and hate, and in acting as an agent for The Devil in tempting people away from Almighty God. In the end, "Mankind" or in a sense, "The People" choose to follow the way of God, and through prayer and penitence, and with Almighty God's divine authority, they are able to rid the Earth (or the World) of "The Frozen Ghost" sending him packing back to his patron, "The Devil" ("Old Hob"). With this, they can now properly celebrate and think of all the souls and spirits of those people who have passed on from Earth beyond the veil. The Frozen Ghost ends up being consigned deep in Hell (or in "Hell's pit"). Happy Halloween!! (Gary Bateman - October 7, 2015) (Rhymed Couplet)

Categories: dark, evil, fantasy, halloween, horror, myth, and scary.

The Frozen Ghost All Hallows’ Eve conjureth yearly an evil of such a mythic yore, As a ghastly icy specter walketh silently now through our door! This frozen ghost of yore giveth we the living his curses on this night, With his blackest of eyes and icy hands delivereth he his horrid fright. The frozen ghost’s unholy eyes mirroreth clear Old Hob’s very plan, To bringeth his fear, hate, and Hellspawn here to God’s divine land! Mankind hath a sacred duty so true to fight Old Hob’s vile temptation, And to resist the frozen ghost’s message whilst praying for redemption. We prayeth now to Almighty God to send this frozen ghost on his way, Back now to Old Hob, never to walk on this Earth another night or day! We honoureth All Hallows’ Eve and thinketh of all departed souls’ wit, Knowing the frozen ghost has gone now—buried so deep in Hell’s pit! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved – October 7, 2015 (Rhymed Couplet)

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Date: 10/14/2015 1:44:00 PM
Hi G!This is a great Halloween poem, that you've penned here and done in Couplets my dear friend Gary!Well done, G!:))Very beautifully written and scary just the perfect tale for Halloween.The title is very cool too!:)I really enjoyed it.Just awesome!Golden pen!A 7+! A fav.And I really hope and pray that you and Ingrid are much better by now and recovering more n' more everyday that goes by, G.Just take very good care of each other now.Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid.All the best to you always,G!Keep the ink flowing !And very Happy Halloween to you both too, G! BOO! BOO!:)) lol...Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/14/2015 8:22:00 PM
Thanks so much as always Dear One "D" -- and for the TR + FAV!! I'm very pleased that you liked "Frozen Ghost" here. And Ingrid and I wish you all the best and A HAPPY HALLOWEEN!! BOO!! BOO!! Cheers and Best Always Dear One "D" . . . Gary
Date: 10/11/2015 2:39:00 PM
excellent piece gary love the visions painted in this pen thumbs up pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Liam Mate!! The Leprechaun Choir helped me with this one. Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/8/2015 7:12:00 AM
An academic masterpiece carefully crafted by literature and aesthetic qualities! A seven times seven! Informative, beautiful, literal!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/8/2015 3:11:00 PM
Herr Professor!! Ich bedanke mich sehr. Das freut mich und das ist immer so gern von dir!! And let's see . . . 7 X 7 = "49" for my rating here. That's truly the highest score I have ever received on Poetry Soup!! I truly enjoyed your epigram too very much!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/7/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thank you for shared this wonderful write. I live it ends. Excellent write. intrigued.........A.M.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/8/2015 3:14:00 PM
A.M. I'm truly glad that you liked my Halloween couplet here. (Beware of the "Frozen Ghost" on any late night walks in the cold mist and the fog!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/7/2015 9:09:00 AM
Hi Gary: A beautiful Halloween poem with a classic theme.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
Hello Ralph!! Thanks for your read of my poem and your great comment. Glad you enjoyed this Halloween couplet. I will drop by to take a peek at your poetry as I haven't had the opportunity to correspond with you. Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 10/7/2015 4:26:00 AM
- Restless souls who can not find peace - They do not belong to the earth .... take them away ..... guide them through "the light" - Dear Gary, a chilling and great Halloween poem (tr.) - Hope you've been a little better now - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2015 5:59:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise Dear One!! I'm always pleased to hear from you and to get your enlightening views of my poetry!! (Thanks for the "TR" too!!) I did take some time to find the right balance with this rhymed couplet. (I am feeling better somewhat now and not working so much yet. I will still go slowly for the next few days. I want to get the draft of my novelette done soon!! I think you, Liam, and Mike will find it quite a tale!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

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