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The Fountain

The Fountain Where have you been my love Did the hours slip from the pools of your thoughts To go wandering heights in vacant skies Did they capture their images on high As you floated through the siphoned mist of your dreams I stood on the golden rim Where comes this shimmer quiet in your eyes Did the blessed heavens kiss away your sadness Flushed you seem with a new coy brilliance Coquette by your demeanour disregards my question I drank from a sacred stream This sleeping softness sensual pressed to warmth Pervades the corners of your mouth; teasing brigands Have those loose moments retaliated their freedom And gathered the snippets of lust once again into ragged ball of passion I lay naked in the dust The tip of your finger is playing upon a pharyngeal string; my love Purring cat you are stretched bare skinned on a Persian rug Your playful whispers intone in those exquisite curves Flexing white porcelain opening of slow swan wings And I held the source spring of my heart Impatient now edges the tangled slides of your auburn curls This gesture turns your shoulder; from behind lowered lashes you look A predator’s toy in scratching claws lays its throat willingly bare Ready to be devoured by a single word; of love I stepped from the golden rim Your palms carry the visions you have seen entranced Coursing through your touch with eclectic imagery There is a moment of succumb, of slavery, in you, my love Relinquishing all but dignity, proud, honest, capitulation and senses devastation I drink from the eternal fountain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/24/2009 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem posted today. This one is so powerfully erotic. Love
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:01:00 AM
Deeply sensual, passionate and so much more. Love the ending line line as the title. Too perfect. You certainly know how to make the reader delve into their own intimate experiences and relate so very well. It is such a gift you own. No, I am not there, though my friends keep inviting me. Spend way too much time on the computer as it is. Thank you Colin. Maybe one day. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:39:00 AM
I had to come back and read it again so it must be great. I am adding you and this piece to my favorites. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:36:00 AM
Wow, This is amazing! It is seductive and arousing. So much passion and desire. The images leap from the page as I read. It plays out so clearly in my mind... I see him seeing her, desiring her, yet she is just out of his reach... the suspense is heartbreaking. In the end he is able to taste of her sweet kiss and then is captive to her, surrendering all to her. Wow, keep writing there has to be more to this great romance. Smiles from Lolita~ maybe I just have a very vivid imagination LOL
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Date: 3/23/2009 9:20:00 PM
This write is great and painful all at once. I know the feeling of fleeting romance...sweeping strong and all of a sudden it becomes fickle and nonexistent. It's mildly regrettable from one side and hurts like hell from the other. Outstanding work Colin. Right on, Write on! Steve
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:12:00 PM
I do brother..I will look you up tonight..thanks for the comments.
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Date: 3/23/2009 5:53:00 PM
I don't know how I should comment on this piece Colin.. I am actually blushing as I read this piece..scared myself for a minute because I started seeing myself as this woman..had to stop reading and come back..LOL..this is some write brother...I hope she reads it and enjoy each morsel because I sure hell did..Can you hear that..I just lit a cigar.
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