The Forging

Your forging of my life, my Lord, has rendered my faith, harder than steel! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 May 2016

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/23/2016 7:32:00 AM

A splendid one liner.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2016 5:25:00 PM

Awesome, Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/22/2016 3:14:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, Andrea for thinking so! You so lovely!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2016 3:41:00 PM

you share such strong faith with this wonderful melody, demetrios... huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/22/2016 3:19:00 AM

If one if forged by life and doesn't break this happens dear, nette. Thank you. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 11:56:00 AM

- A powerful line, great written my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne- Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/22/2016 3:21:00 AM

As powerful as my friend is! Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/21/2016 1:32:00 AM

Amen, my dear esteemed poet. :) Sophia sou...enai opos panda...katapliktikos. Kalimera...pos eseh? Thelo na sou po...an thelis na me dhes, ekana mia programma sto Youtube. Afto enai to URL: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=35WyUfZLzqc Themase oti emai paxouloueeeeee! ;) Ketakste to, kai pe mou...ti nomezetai...Se Parakalo? Efkharisto...kai filakia..H Mykroula

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/21/2016 4:25:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit and comment my dear friend, Eileen! Yes, I will do it and let you know! Efxaristo! Filakia!