The Force

Adding peculiar subtracting never laws of something (besides physics) has to wants to needs to improve velocity is present and that very force pushes the dead weight forward until it can't sit still anymore because it has to it's got to move or else it dies

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2012 5:56:00 PM

ahhhhh released! creation can not occur without destruction ;) Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2012 11:49:00 PM

Just like the Doobie Brothers sing "It Keeps You Running". One must constantly move and strive for the better. You have described it all well here.

Broken Butterfly

Date: 1/11/2012 7:41:00 AM

I love this JS. It is like random thoughts coming at me. Very creative and poetic. I want to thank you for all your amazing comments and support of my poetry. It means so much to me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 5:10:00 PM

I really like that: it HAS to move or it dies. Awesome thought, my friend. well, I hope to see more of you, but as usual I have to rush. Luv ya, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 1:00:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Outstanding poetry this afternoon JS. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/10/2012 12:55:00 PM

Wonderful, simply wonderful! I just love the last three powerful lines! I really enjoyed this write Joey! To be pushed to the point when we must move is really the reason for poetry! I write because I have the urge, the desire, the need to write something poetic...it's the way to this Force, to write!! Always moving desire to write, I love the creativity that does come from this Force! Great write Joey! Excellent Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2012 4:48:00 AM

Enjoy life....a happy heart live longer. :)oxox hugs Anne-Lise