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The Fluttering Feather

Upon a sheer and jagged cliff an Appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic under the blazing azure sky. An Ojibwa girl, proud, looks at the beautiful land of Canada as the mighty wind roars. A feather in her raven long hair quietly moves. Below the Ottawa River thunders and the vast lands of wilderness stretch to the horizon. The feather is caught by the blowing breeze and . . fluttering drifting it dances in the mighty wind to and fro it soars Above in the perfect sky an eagle glides symbolizing the strength of my people, the Ojibwa. We and our native brothers once owned this land, the rivers, the trees and the fish. In the end we lost. The only sound is the wind that takes my beautiful twirling, swirling feather . . . floating hovering a ballet in the mighty wind to and fro it glides ___________________________ April 25, 2015 Poetry/Haibun/The Fluttering Feather Copyright Protected, ID 04-666-867-25 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Date: 4/26/2015 4:23:00 PM
Excellent first attempt! Could consider publication on contemporaryhaibunonline.com Best wishes, Tom
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:57:00 AM
Sound poetry like a mid night song scrubbing the mind to peace and comfort. I love everything about this page and a 7 definitely.
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:20:00 PM
A7 all the way, loved the form, and loved the topic!
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:05:00 PM
this is amazing, Constance - a sure winner here. Will finish with your limerick x
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