The Flu

There was a young man from Rangou Who had a bad case of the flu His plans were all spoiled So he took castor oil Now he spends lots of time in the loo

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:25:00 PM

Curtis, It's so good to see you on the winners' list since it's always like a week before I happen on you here! YOur meter is excellent . Congrats on your win.

David Williams

Date: 1/9/2012 7:27:00 AM

Curtis congrats on your win ..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Sneezing Limerick" contest Curtis. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/8/2012 9:59:00 PM

Well done Curtis. Congratulations

Kash Poet

Date: 1/8/2012 7:17:00 PM

Congrats Curtis on your win.Enjoyed the humour very much.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/8/2012 6:57:00 PM

ps...is there such a place as RANGOU? lol...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/8/2012 6:56:00 PM

Hi Curits! It WAS YOU..YOU R THE CASTOR OIL POET!! I love it when poets don't put their names on their entries. It makes it much more enjoyable to judge! Anyways..one of the guy judges thot you were from Europe bc of your reference to the LOO. The final round judging was over ice cream and coffee at the ice cream parlor..it was a great time and they want to do it again..Oh my! I thot it was suspenseful and stressful both bc I wanted everyone to win 1st place! Hugs to you. And yes,....I am doing great! Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2011 4:40:00 PM

I didn't think that castor oil was used anymore..It is a horrible med..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Curtis Moorman
Date: 12/30/2011 4:49:00 PM

You're right, Sara, it's not used any more, but I'm old enough to remember what it was like. It would certainly cure a cold real quick as well as aid in getting rid of the flu. Of course, the side effects were the worst problem. HAPPY NEW YEAR!