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The Flight

The flight, supposed to leave at 6 Departed much, much later And to our few demands, the airline Didn't really cater. The reasons why were iffy - There was traffic, fuel was low But explanations didn't help - We wanted just to go. They told us to deplane and take Our bags and all our stuff. A brand-new pilot's coming soon - But not quite soon enough. At last, half-past eleven, We took off and hit the skies. The passengers, exhausted, Shut their lights and closed their eyes. We got to our hotel at 3 a.m., Too pooped to pop. The joys of airline travel - Well, they never seem to stop. But still, we had a lovely day Despite our tired state. We're flying home on Sunday - Gee, I really cannot wait!

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Date: 7/12/2014 12:38:00 PM
Hi Ilene. I really like your poems. Your mind is all over the place. That's refreshing and shows immense creativity. I wondered if you knew that this poem and what seems to be most of your others are Quatrain poems. I see you label them rhyme instead. Is that on purpose? Anyway; keep on writing. You have too rich a talent to stop. Trevor
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Date: 7/10/2014 10:28:00 PM
Hi ilene, you should look up the lyrics, fly, fly, fly by Brewer and shipley and give it a listen. I think you'd enjoy. Peace. :)
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