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The First Gift

There’s news for the young and news for the old,
And news for a world lonely and cold,
And down through the ages this story’s been told
How Love was revealed to all.

Into the world that was full of strife 
God told Mary that she would give life
To a boy-child, and become Joseph’s wife 
And not to be afraid, at all.	

In order to keep the law of the land, 
They traveled in winter over hills, rocks and sand. 
To Bethlehem they went, hand in hand
But there were no rooms for them all. 

The inn keeper said, ‘I’ve no rooms inside
But out here there’s a stable; around the side,
So in you all come, it’s dry and wide.
They all trooped inside, one and all.

The donkey and ox shared their bed in the straw.
Joseph spread their blankets over the floor
He put hay in the manger, and then saw 
Mary give birth in the stall.

He went to her side and beheld the sight.
In wonder he helped her through the long winter night.
They placed the babe snug and tight
In the manger; He slept through it all.

The first to hear were watchers of sheep 
Wrapped up in their robes, their watch to keep,
Staying awake, they did not sleep, 
Until the sun appeared over all.

While they sat in the fields all through that night,
The light from a bright star gave them a fright,
Until the messenger came within sight, 
And pointed the way to the stall. 

This brightest star shone across every nation;
It showed the way on this special occasion,
For three wise of men, who with elation, 
Followed this star to the stall. 

First shepherds, then kings entered the door
Of the humble stable, where Jesus they saw, 
Among lowing cattle, in a bed of straw;
God’s brightest star; born for all.

Each offered their gifts to the one who would give
His life, so we might know how to live.
When we do wrong, with love He’ll forgive,
So we can forgive one and all.

At Christmas time, like that first gift from heaven, 
There’s love received with each gift that is given,
Wrapped in fine paper and sparkling ribbon,
To remind us God’s love, shines for all.

The words set to rhyme and rearranged,
This story throughout time, unchanged.
Just as God's love has never changed,
It is here and now for all. 

written by Wordancer

Copyright © J Eliza JAMES

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  1. Date: 3/16/2014 1:26:00 PM
    Eliza :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 10:32:00 AM
    J Eliza, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:17:00 PM
    Nice rewrite! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
    Great testimony of your faith..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..This is still the greatest story told to mankind..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Good writhing, here is a poem I can enjoy alot. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

    JAMES Avatar J Eliza JAMES
    Date: 2/23/2012 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Words fall on the page to my delight This story was not mine only by right I tend to rhyme when I write So I am please you found it enjoyable, Annelise Wordancer
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:14:00 AM
    Beautiful rhyme, wonderful.

    JAMES Avatar J Eliza JAMES
    Date: 2/20/2012 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hello Raskin, happy you enjoyed it, please drop by again, wordancer
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:59:00 AM
    Thanks for your kind comment re my poem. I thoroughly enjoyed your very talented write, "The First Gift". God bless, Maureen

    JAMES Avatar J Eliza JAMES
    Date: 2/20/2012 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for dropping for a visit one thing about the internet; it makes distances between people shrink.
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:12:00 PM
    nice write ~always p.d.

    JAMES Avatar J Eliza JAMES
    Date: 2/19/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again so glad you had time to look around; our time line is so far apart that when you're here I won't hear a sound, but you are most welcome any time. Wordancer