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Fire is so important..... We can't cook our food without fire. The suns is the source of fire To the world, it gives light. But, what I don't like on fire is When it burns my skin and the houses. Much more that I hate most is, when it is compared to a fight, Which had started from a petty argument of husband and wife And they throw things out of the window of their house. But the fire I love the most Is the fire of Love from our heart, Most especially of the fire of love from God above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/17/2012 8:11:00 PM
amen, a man went to a silver refinery and asked the artisan , how do you know when the silver is ready to come out of the furnance,the man looked at him and smiled, and said I know when it is ready when I can see the features of my face reflecting, God bless you
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:51:00 PM
hey, can you think of any poems of yours I have missed, sweetie? I may have seen them all. This was a really nice one that I had seen before. Thanks for reading my poems. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2012 10:04:00 AM
Great analogy here Leonora. As with the elements of life, it creates life and can cause death. Lovely message conveyed!
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Date: 8/15/2012 1:19:00 AM
Lovely poem Leonora. You've developed the theme very well. And your categorization of the different forms of fire is on point. Nice!
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Date: 8/14/2012 6:40:00 PM
this is really nice, Leonora, one of your recent ones that I had missed. I enjoyed seeing this tonight.
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Date: 4/30/2012 7:54:00 PM
Leonora, i like the fire that sparks this poem.. and the fire you love the most.. with out passion.. this world would just burn.. lol.. I agree about the things we don't like about fire.. the disasters is leaves behind.. i can also do without the fire igniting in an argument. This is a wonderful poem.. fire can be a good consumption for us humans. to a limit.. enjoyed..pd
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/18/2012 4:29:00 AM
Just read your comment because I've been from a long vacation. Well, thank you very very much!
Date: 4/23/2012 5:22:00 AM
Like it, well written Leonora. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/23/2012 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Ann-Lise. Have a grace-filled day! love, leonora

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