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The Fire

Coughing, choking on all the smoke Barely getting any air Cant breath Glass shattered on the ground Trying to listen for some kind of sound All I can hear is the fire crackling As the flames slowly start to spread Cant even feel my legs Blood running down my face Now every inch of my body is filled with pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2016 12:21:00 PM
BRIANNA CALDERON, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:22:00 PM
Brianna, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:38:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Briana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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