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The Fire

Fire that burns; Fire it burns, Heaven and Earth- The heaven of earth. The fire I see Burns the visions; The fire I see That burns for reasons. The tsunami of fire, The fire of tsunami- All hurt, 'cause, Fire! It burns!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 9:43:00 AM
So apocalyptic...the fire also burns the inner psyche. The metaphor of fire is the same throughout the world irrespective of temporality... the holocaust is nicely painted. Go on Subhayan...
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:14:00 PM
Nice display of words worded nicely, Subhayan
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:54:00 AM
Touched the flame in this write and got burned. Excellent piece.
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