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The Final Call

What waits when last
the final call
says come that's all,
it's time to go;

a chariot
and bright white glow
where angels go,
or just darkness?

Written by Craig Cornish Aug. 4, 2014
for Nette Onclaud's Pathya Vat contest

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  1. Date: 8/11/2014 6:29:00 PM
    Oh a chariot ride to the other side. beautiful, grats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 2:58:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:34:00 AM
    Great write , leaves one pondering ! congrats on ur fabulous win!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 4:59:00 AM
    hauntingly beautiful with deep introspection, craig... as always, you flow!.. thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your splendid win.. huggs

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 11:28:00 AM
    This is my favorite of the bunch...congrats Craig

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 9:26:00 AM
    dropping back with my congratulations Craig:-) Hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 6:14:00 AM
    lovely take on the theme, Craig - a top winner. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 5:32:00 AM
    Very creative and inventive write, craig, congrats on the win

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 8:39:00 PM
    Time will day in the after glow What is going to show enjoyed your verse this evening Craig xxx

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 7:15:00 PM
    love this

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 6:56:00 PM
    Craig, this is a most beautiful tribute to the imaginative...I pray that many will go to the bright white light, but we know that few will enter the bridal chamber. Best of luck in Nette's contest. I love these spiritual writes the most. :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 5:43:00 PM
    oh gosh, I sure wish I could come up with something so inventive for this one. Gosh, what to do what to do? Good one!!!

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 1:00:00 PM
    This is good - I want to go where the light is. I have never liked darkness. Thanks for sharing and have a great day... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 11:53:00 AM
    Lovely take on the theme Craig:-) I am still struggling to finish mine:-( Good luck in the contest Hugs Jan xxx

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 11:48:00 AM
    Wow that's a reality of life ,, tranquility in the end ,, good luck to u Craig !