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The Fault Line

Lying is just a game like dice roll. Never dealing with personal shame, fingers crossed, the issues I control; lying was just a game. Always looking for who I could blame. Partial truths were a see-through blindfold; my world split wide open all the same. Choking myself in a stranglehold, I lost my mind, disgraced by lies' claim. I paid the price for being so bold - lying ruined my good name. roundel, written November 23, 2016

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Date: 11/24/2016 11:44:00 PM
I don't know the form really, but I did enjoy the words - very much! CayCay
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Date: 11/26/2016 8:57:00 PM
thanks, CayCay, it's the repetition that I like. I'm crazy about new forms.
Date: 11/23/2016 2:34:00 PM
an unusual but meaningful handle for the theme, reason... you did deliver without any literary fault!.. huggs
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Date: 11/26/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thanks, nette, appreciate the time you took to make a comment. This is written in first person for effect only. I am actually not that much of a big liar. More so, when I was less mature.

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