The Fallen

I have fallen Don’t help me up, let me spend some time here by myself ….. Alone I feel nothing inside Empty Chilled to the bone I will get up on my own Once again I will roll like a stone Crawling back up through the darkness I will reclaim my throne

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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2009 2:54:00 PM

Like a verse from Shakespear James, deep, dark but somewhat creative write>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2009 7:25:00 AM

Interesting. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/13/2009 4:02:00 AM

yes i fall and fall yet i get up again--beautiful message,im glad my fingertips led me here--charma

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/12/2009 6:27:00 PM

and what is it the thrown you are trying to reclaim? pride perhaps? no help, let me rise alone, empty. May be filled with yourself when accomplished alone, but when the feeling gone the loneliness stays. so many interpretation i have in my mind when reading this poem, very good!