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The Fall Contest

One sweet smell of fall can be easily obtained, Captivated by the changes in the scent of tranquil rain, Taking in the crisp, clean, breezy air Original memories invade my head of times I have shared Borrowing deep inside my silky sheets Enjoying the fragrance of fire places burning on my street Reminiscing of days of old, watching as the season unfolds. By: Sabina Nicole Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 11:14:00 PM
Nicely done and great win. Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:28:00 PM
I really like the way you incorporated the smell of fall, you're absolutely right. I said last week when I let my dog out in the morning, it smells like fall. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,sabina
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:02:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:40:00 PM
How wonderful that you painted a 'visual' picture with scents! All those aromas put a lot of very pleasant pictures in my mind's eye. Well done and congrats from Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:06:00 PM
Sabina, I could picture, hear and even smell fall when reading your beautiful poem. Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:00:00 PM
hey Sabina congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:25:00 AM
Sabina, Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congrats Sabina on first place win with this cool write on Fall luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:19:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:15:00 AM
WOW~~~ all of the given months were given an acrostic form~~~so talented...thumbs up for this one my friend~~~winning wishes~~~*-*jun-jun
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