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The Fall

then here, idle now to some small thought i wander though this timeless court and drift beyond what i have known and see the weight of pastures sown discover i must unknowing why who i am beneath the sky i close my eyes and feel the pull of timeless days I know the rule. down down to the depth discover i what is left of what began a simple boy innocent full of joy down down does this end as i wash in its decent down down and still it goes back to where a spring was sown a fear grips the torn grey heart as it descends to the start will it stop as still i fall clawing at this living wall down down out of sight the noisome wind the fading light faster still as i fall dropped down inside a pit-stone wall and slowly now i reach the depths of mind and soul of what is left the air is damp i breath in deep uneven bottom beneath my feet. and here i am

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Date: 3/17/2014 4:41:00 PM
Paul, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:30:00 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, paul
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Date: 3/7/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Paul :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:44:00 AM
Lovely poem...expressed so naturally and I like the way it flows. // paul
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:06:00 AM
a beautiful write, Paul. I enjoy nature at her best or worst. Having you deeply inside yourself, was amazing. clawing the feelings of it all... epic imagery. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:59:00 AM
This reminds me of my childhood, playing in the woods behind my house, climbing those tall trees and then jumping to the ground..very nice to read this early morn..Blessings, Chris
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