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The Failed Sunrise

The blackened sky revives in blue. Sky’s mess of gray becomes a hue. The robin chirps to see the dawn, Now all await what has been gone. The sphere most bright, a circle smear Unfolds straight upward, very near Until the sun appears in sight. From edge of nothing creeps the light. But on this morn came sickly rot, The black seas rambled from the spot Where sky had fallen into dust. The currents smelled of curdled must. The final fate was clear depicted, And from a morning unpredicted Earth's life was taken surprise, And nevermore the sun would rise. Horizon cracked, the grasses blood, Raw reddened scabs of flooded mud. The living pierced in lung and heart, Convulsion’s dance, perverted art. The stifled screams of gasping pain Are deadened in the viscous rain. Now stiffened carcasses will lay And putrefy in crimson clay. Where magma tongues caress the sod, Come bright endowments from our God. The sackcloth moon unthreads and burns The twisted gods did mankind spurn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/20/2011 8:54:00 PM
The wording of this poem reminds me a bit of the Book of Revelation in the New Testament. You have good descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this presentation.
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:41:00 AM
A little taste of what could happen and what possibly will happen at the end of the time..Keep the prophetic pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:05:00 AM
What a unique and well written description of mans and the worlds demise. I loved the way you began this poem capturing the beginning of a beautiful morning and building to the destruction and end. Well written my friend.
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