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The Fading Ink

Gemstones sell Birthstones tell Stars delight Personality rights But Hearts are falling again Desires are ruling again Words don't make sense anymore And sometimes they're too much sense, its sore Red accents....to her.. by accident Red accents..to him....he thinks it's access Well Her take, the path there needs emerald toes fully zealous His take, jokes and play will hold her by a yoke Hearts Guarded Hearts dreaming Hearts roaming

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/10/2015 9:12:00 AM

Two hearts: 1 of desire and flirtatious, the other solemn and serious. These are 2 people in different stages of the same relationship. Did I get it right? I ask because I felt their division and thought perhaps you wanted me to. Either way, it is a compelling write ... CayCay

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/18/2015 6:34:00 AM

Thank you CayCay i appreciate the advice :-)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/12/2015 1:18:00 PM

Then the wrong people have been reading you. I learned that in order to keep your words from being tainted, you have to wisely choose creative and, especially, emotionally evolved people. If you share with those who don't expose feeling and meet it head on, they won't 'get it' and will make you feel 'inadequate.' Only share with those who live evolved. That is just my advice ... CayCay

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/10/2015 9:57:00 AM

Yes CayCay you exactly got the meaning. I understand this is another of my hard poems to understand but you got it right! Thank you for the visit CayCay