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The Face of Dawn

Yellow the colour when I see your lovely hair Green is the colour of your evocative eyes, Rose Pink lips of sparkling dew. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/21/2013 11:45:00 PM

You've painted Dawn well here-- I think it's cool how this can be for an actual person or for personification of dawn...that last line sure evokes inpsiration, no wonder Mandy got inspired to write a gem from this other gem! Thank you for passing by with your touching comments, Harry! Always such a delight to hear from you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/27/2013 6:24:00 AM

She sounds lovely.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/23/2013 1:54:00 PM

So beautifully penned Harry

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 7/17/2013 9:19:00 AM

This is really romantic Harry, glad to read this in my evening, loved the way you describe the face of dawn, beautiful :) hug, Yanny

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/15/2013 10:00:00 PM

Sounds like love.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2013 9:06:00 PM

Harry, lovely, and love how you see the wake of your every day... I say it is nice.. to feel the sun rising by your side always...love love...Linda.. soup mail

Kash Poet

Date: 7/11/2013 11:49:00 AM

Wow!Great romantic Tanka here Harry.Lovely read.

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/11/2013 8:18:00 AM

Excellent picture drawn with beautiful colorful words. Loved always, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/10/2013 7:59:00 PM

Makes me say ahhhh!! :) You are on a roll !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2013 3:16:00 PM

beautifully personified!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/10/2013 12:42:00 PM

A great Tanka, Harry!!! very nice... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2013 10:58:00 AM

- Harry ... BEAUTIFUL !!!!!! ..... send you a rose pink kiss - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/10/2013 6:18:00 AM

This is a fantastic write my friend! It's nice to see you back and writing some spectacular poetry again! I truly enjoyed reading this romantic poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/10/2013 5:28:00 AM

Oh.... ;) Beautiful, Harry....simply beautiful....

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/10/2013 3:38:00 AM

The words are great Harry, lovely to see you here...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/10/2013 12:56:00 AM

Nice to see you posting again and these two new tanka's are wonderful xx