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The Eyes of a Demon

Eyes of a Demon As the young woman walked home late one evening Little did she know, one gazed upon her with the eyes of a demon Earily silent except for the sound of her high heels Demon eyes watching, wondering how ravishing her body would feel His evil thoughts full of lust His sinful mouth salivating as under his breath he cussed When she reaches this corner, her body I'll grab If she attempts to scream, a knife in her chest I will stab The closer she got, the faster his heart beat His body trembling with excitement, anticipating this meet Closer, closer, closer still Rape, torture, then kill The eyes of the demon gazed The evil intentions of his mind, his conscience did not faze Then the moment arrived Two souls collide Violently he muffled her scream At first she thought this must be a dream Then seeing in his hand a large knife She knew she must fight to save her life A loud bang, a bright flash in the dark Through the shadows, she could see she hit her mark She stood over his prone body as his life drifted away The demon gaze in his eyes will no longer stay Faded, gone, in the dirt where his dead body lay There will come a day when this evil tale of lore All demon eyes will be destroyed and exist no more For now, let's be warned my friend Beware of the demon eyes gazing, lusting for your life to end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/20/2016 6:34:00 PM
Shirley, amazing story... I enjoyed. Skat
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/21/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/10/2015 8:04:00 PM
oh shirley I really like this . I just love it when the evil get conquered. But what was the bang? She was carrying a gun?? You should make a twist on this one! It is already good and creepy enough for that one contest I see going on!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 10/11/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thanks, yep she evidentially had a gun.
Date: 9/28/2015 10:36:00 PM
Definite 7 on this poem. Well crafted and great from start to finish!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 9/29/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 9/16/2015 8:29:00 PM
Perfectly Drawn...... ..xx
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 9/16/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 9/16/2015 3:41:00 PM
For dark and twisted contest
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