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The Experience.

A shot to the head.
A stab to the heart.
This is how it feels,
to have your world fall apart.

Start breathing again.
Now never look back.
It's time for you to move on,
It's time to get on track.

These things you tell yourself;
You need to move one.
You never missed him so much,
Until the day he was gone.

Will you be loved again?
Will someone care?
Should you jump back in?
Should you dare?

The first time you're hurt,
is the worst of all.
How could you feel so broken
by something so small?

It feels like you lost your life.
All you did was cry.
This is what you put yourself through,
all because he said goodbye.

Copyright © Rachel W

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  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:38:00 PM
    Ooh. Truly a stab to the heart, I can feel what you're feeling. Fantastic from start to end!

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:04:00 PM
    it will always hurt, it will never heal or go away but in time you will bear it. Its these things that make you a woman. Take care of yourself, put your self first always. Then you will meet your husband and all will be well.