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The Exodus

Oh this hour is ill
rends those it should reunite
together as one,
yet my wings from you in flight
time it is to say goodbye.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:38:00 AM
    When I read this again, Yoda came to mind. It must be the wisdom that permeates the piece. Have a great day Harry.

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:46:00 AM
    I think I should learn how to write Tanka, glad you liked my tell, I needed some humor ;} thank you for reading '}

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Oh noooo! I love your old world style in this one. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:20:00 PM
    The human spirit has solemn wings. Alone in flight is how it sings. If one day comes back round. Together we'll hear a lovely sound. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 12:33:00 AM
    Very deep. Excellent write! Thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Hi Harry! Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:15:00 AM
    There's always a time for everything...a time to read beautiful poems like this..and a time to beg you to stay... after a good read :-)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Wow!! This tanka is just absolutely stunning, Harry! You are such a talented poet, this was an absolute pleasure to stop by and read. Hope you are having yourself an aaaaaaaamazing Sunday! Hugs and love :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Very nice tanka here harry.Thought provoking write.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Hi Harry, just had to come and say hello to you. Miss you *hugs*

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:03:00 AM
    dearest Harry.. thank you so much for every visits and supports.. and hoping to read your writes soon <3 :) much luv and hugs <3 Sk

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Harry back for another taste of this wonderful write....David

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 10:27:00 PM
    hello Harry, it is hard to say goodbye... sometimes exodus happen in such a way we don't even get to say and leave with the proper goodbyes .... and if it's a goodbye you are saying... it is going to be hard... adding more hurt to myself is not good... and like my sis on the bottom.. I love it when you stop by always... sorry I haven't been on as much as i was. I do try to keep up. It helps to keep my mind off of things. I hope to hear from you soon. I know you will not leave without a hug. PD

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 6:02:00 PM
    Harry, hope this is only a poem. You are one of the reasons I still log on to the soup. Love-Skat

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 10:22:00 AM
    O!! 'arry such angst! Fabulous! Well done. Thank you for your visit and kind words 'arry ;) Big Hug Deb

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 3:18:00 PM
    This don't sound too good to me. If you are living - you didn't ask for permission. You are not allowed to go. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..I hope that it is just a poem and not a goodbye unless you really need to say goodbye..Thanks for your visit..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 10:28:00 AM
    - I'm not that good with "goodbye" ....... - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Sad tanka penned Harry, Please say it isn't so I'd rather bask in your hello Or the glow of your halo xxxx Rose