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The Evening Snow---Quatern

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To watch snow tumble from the sky on streets that clamor with unrest, the eyes behold the mystery, of nature at its very best. I lift my eyes in evening air to watch snow tumble from the sky and marvel over nature, rare, that hides each flaw to glorify. As grumbling shoppers pass me by, and traffic rumbles in a state, to watch snow tumble from the sky No time to awe, or slow the gait. They cannot see beyond the cold, or witness magic for the eye But, I must stop, my breath's on hold to watch snow tumble from the sky _____________________________________________ 1/25/16 For Andrea's Contest "Write Me A Quatern"

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Date: 2/7/2016 11:22:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest!!! *smiles* -luloo :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to snow, Carrie, as seen from your creative mind. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:07:00 AM
This is so charming, Carrie. Congratulations on a great poem.
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:17:00 AM
CARRIE, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:14:00 PM
A beautiful flawless Quatern, dear Carrie. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:58:00 PM
Good one, Carrie, as always. Goes well with the image. Upscale shopping, for sure.
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:35:00 PM
another snow poem that I put high on my list. Congratulations, Carrie. Great writing, which you show us so often here at Soup! perfect meter and rhyme. and the imagery was very nice too.
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:25:00 PM
beautiful poem. I don't mind watching the snow. Not that I ever get too down here in Texas. LINDA
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:11:00 PM
A very lovely poem Carrie. It brings to mind Christmas shopping.
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