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The Engagement

Our engagement started early One Thursday back in may I had prepared my speech days before Anticipating today. Birds aware and singing The trees are in full bloom My lady is sleeping peacefully Only to be awoken soon. Breakfast made & waiting Candles glowing with an apple scent The sounds of Ray Charles' playing Everything's right, it's time. Just then her arms embrace me Around my torso from the back She kissed my neck, it tickled A grin appears I laugh A look of shock appeared As I dropped one knee Her eyes start forming tears As she concentrates on me With confidence I ask " Will you be my wife? Be with me now and in death, Living one complete life." "Yes!!" She said with joy Hugging and kissing me with delight. "I've been waiting for so long, Your timing was just right." I've written a little something A verse for you to hear. This will be my vow to you So relax, get comfortable And lend me your ears. You're the air that I breathe, and the glow in my soul. You're everything I've envisioned, there is nothing I want more. With every passing day, and every year that you are mine. My love for you will grow infinite, my wife until and past the end of time. I respect everything you stand for, I'll back you when times get rough. The bond we share is unbreakable, so yes!! Love is enough.... Jared Pickett 9/01/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 10/3/2010 10:44:00 AM
congrats on the win and well written poem of love and commitment!
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:46:00 AM
absolutely beautiful, congrats on your win
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:04:00 PM
Jared this is simply breath taking and a delight to read. Many congratulations on your win in Catie's lovely contest >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations Jared for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:59:00 PM
So when did you present this cool love note to her, Jared? Congrats on your big win! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:22:00 PM
What a lovely story behind this poem, Jared. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. ILY Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Jared
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:55:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your big win in the Love Notes contest... a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy my friend with luv... great win..luv...
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:10:00 PM
Wow Mr. JP this is so beautiful. I hope you will soon find the right one that you need to be with you. Love Scarlett
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Date: 10/21/2009 10:40:00 AM
that was absolutley gorgeous and i think you have done her well so if we could stand today the worlds best hand :) Brittany Rivet :)
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Date: 9/5/2009 3:44:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Jared, not more i can say>>James
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem of commitment to a lady, words and form just right, flowing like a river, with deliver! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/1/2009 10:13:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful... May You and Your Lady Find Complete Bliss Forevermore MoonBee
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:58:00 PM
What a tender, romantic poem of true love! How lucky you both are !! Lovely write! ~Carrie
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