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The Ending Day

Watching the stars As they gently appear. One by one they glow The sun slowly slipping down The sky now a pallet of hue Sounds of nature that were hidden by the bustle of day, now free to be expressed. Thus the mood changes. Gazing upon the vast lake that gently ripples in the light of the moon. Mist rolling through the silhouette of the woodland. How the change in light paints a new picture. As I look up now I see a realm of history. Undiscovered universe that supplies me with wonder. Beautiful, as a flower at the end of its life. Dried and wilting But forever composed. Sleepy as I take in the splendour of the turn of a new day. Captivating the moments as if the first, except they are forever more. Entered in Laura Mckenzies Contest

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Date: 3/1/2010 3:04:00 PM
I am glad to see from the coments below people are reading your work because it is worth reading , Cheers for your comments thank you, please keep reading and writting Ta
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:56:00 PM
Natures described in its splendour with your wonderful words Gareth, good luck in Laura's contest >> James
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Date: 2/28/2010 2:59:00 PM
Lovely lilting words Gareth.. a magical write of Nature and its beauty.. so enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie .. u have surely captured the essence ...
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Date: 2/28/2010 6:46:00 AM
SO BEAUTIFUL-Charma
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:43:00 AM
Beautiful way to end the day
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