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The End of Time

Looking down from way up here to that revolving globe down there it seems to swirl itself around having such flaming colours so rare Wonder what’s living in that ball heard once about something human were found on one of these planets even thinking about being a free man Once heard that God created humans but not all of them really liked it maybe this why it’s all burning up He’s punishing them for they’re split Makes you think serious about life this God’s supposed to love this lot but if His love is spurned out then His patience is finally shot The end of time looks to be here for that revolving globe of fire wonder if any have escaped maybe end up somewhere else! (An alien looking down on earth on it's final day of time.)

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Date: 6/14/2016 11:55:00 AM
Very interesting premise, Gordon! A very thought-provoking write...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/14/2016 12:10:00 PM
thanks Michael, glad you thought so!

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