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The End of the Road

( Subtitle : Let the road end, let love linger ) Grapes and grandeur in the pink sun We shared for our pleasure The frost and fervor that we spun Looked beyond erasure Love and hate are too much ingrained I know, in our apples As the maples dropped off in pain Paled the passion purple How come our bubbles got so sick Was our love just a lust Or else how the wall grew so quick Billowing mean distrust Okay, let the wedded road end Let us remain just friends You go your way and me mine bend With shared rains in our veins Time releases both stink and scent Dahlias we did love Will wear off too the discontent Clouds of love float above ----------------------------------------------- 6 January 2017/Rhyme Scheme : abab Syllable count : 8-6-8-6/Contest sponsor : Nicola Byrne

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Date: 1/19/2017 7:41:00 AM
Nice write Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/19/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Inman ...
Date: 1/16/2017 12:24:00 AM
Beautifully described the two themes combined. Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/16/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, ... probir ...
Date: 1/8/2017 7:17:00 PM
Powerful emotion indeed, "The frost and fervor that we spun Looked beyond erasure" nicely put.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2017 10:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/8/2017 2:35:00 PM
Your voice of reconciliation and accepted resignation is of profound intonations. A most magnificent poem, Probir. The gravity and love of this poem is tremendous. Serious and delicate is this splendid poetic tapestry woven by your skilled hand. A true work of art. Love and peace to you.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/8/2017 10:59:00 AM
Your romantic themed works are exceptional.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2017 10:25:00 AM
May be you like them more ... Thanks ...
Date: 1/8/2017 1:20:00 AM
Love the emotion you put to the verse. Good luck dear friend hugs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/8/2017 4:53:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/6/2017 10:19:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nice write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2017 12:35:00 AM
Thank you ... aah, had you been the sponsor ...!
Date: 1/6/2017 8:20:00 PM
Very wise and necessary, Probir, but well presented - vastly far beyond what is required. : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2017 12:37:00 AM
Well , thank you ...
Date: 1/6/2017 11:44:00 AM
Top class verses my friend. A pleasure to read such a fine poem!! A7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/6/2017 9:57:00 AM
So poetic, Probir:) I love your poem, my friend. Good luck!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/6/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/6/2017 5:20:00 AM
Very beautiful and sentimental writing that culminates to friendship! Good luck dear Probir! A seven my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/6/2017 5:43:00 AM
Thank you ...

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