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The End of a Nightmare

Overwhelming fear Paralized by dread Insecurities Doubt abilities Future not very safe Darkness pervades Can't see future Lover leaves doubts Balancing act Love assures He takes hand Surrender Leader Alfa Male

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/14/2011 5:59:00 AM

if an alfa male can be this altruistic, i'll buy one, lol!! such a wonderfully-written piece, sara! :) huggs, nette

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/14/2011 5:30:00 AM

alpha male, my dear. john

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2011 4:55:00 AM

Nice example of that poetry form, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2011 9:26:00 PM

It's good when they "step up, " Sara. I don't mind an alpah male. Seems nowadays, some of them have become almost more sensitve than their women!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2011 7:03:00 PM

This looks like a fine example of a diminished hexaverse. I will have to try writing something like this soon.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/13/2011 4:20:00 PM

Enjoiyed the nice poetic form of Diminished Hexaverse on The end of a nightmare. wish you good luck in the contest, sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/13/2011 3:26:00 PM

Strong write my dear.. powerful words with intense meanings...always with love Michael