The Embrace
The embrace made me into the woman
that stands before you.
Silently your love entered into my heart
Healing it as your touch caressed
my body and soul
Unknown to me my heart was in love with you
and at the same time my mind keeps reflecting
on my past embraces
But without the feeling of lost
because you gave me your heart with no cost
You embraced me like I was your first love
and in return you are mine
Re-write with Mentor Mary Oliver Rotman
8-13-15
The Embrace
The embrace made me the women
that stands before you.
Silently your love entered my heart
Healing it as your touch caressed
my body and soul
Unknown to me my heart was in love with you
and at the same time my mind keeps reflecting
on past embraces
But without the feeling of loss
because you gave me your heart with no cost
You embraced me like I was your first love
and in return you are mine.
Copyright © April Walter Skyy | Year Posted 2015
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