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The Elephant Fort

Black beauties in chains- Before the ticket counters, A long queue does creep To scatter near the black wonders. Ears and tails always move, Ruminating the rhythms of forest. Elephants are inside the fort, Exposed to the sky barest. I hear the hushed emotions In the clinking of chains. Hearts smoulder in; Eyes emit lava of pains. Burning red wild flowers And tickling streams, Each elephant longs I know: But chains kill dreams. FABIYAS M V (Anakotta(a fort for the elephants) at Punathur, Guruvayur, Kerala,India is a tourist place, where you see a large number of elephants together. All are chained.) First place winner in 'Your(own) Favorite Poem' contest by Destroyer A poet(PD)

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Date: 3/9/2012 8:42:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Fab. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:38:00 AM
Really it was wonderful which I had missed. Thanks God reminded me to read this yours. Wish you Sweet Happy Christmas day and Happy New Year 2012. bl
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:58:00 AM
oooo! I'm Sorry FAB,,,, i called you BOB,,, i don';t know why i called you bob... Is it okay to call you FAB,,, for short... or is there another short name.. i can initial you with if you don't mind..lol... how about bob...kidding..kidding... sorry i woke up in a good spirit...xooxox,..p.d.
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:19:00 AM
Dear Bob, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Fabiyas. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2011 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. I too, love elephants and actually collect statues and carvings of elephants. I have about 40 different ones. It is a great poem, no wonder it is your favourite. Lee
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Date: 9/20/2011 11:46:00 PM
Thanks to all who supported and encouraged me.
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Date: 9/20/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Fabiyas on a first place win with this excellent entry my friend.. awesome ..luv..
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Date: 9/20/2011 5:08:00 PM
a sad state of affairs! congrad's light & Love
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Date: 9/20/2011 3:35:00 PM
Tremendous a well deserved top of tree placing.. blessings from Paul.
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Date: 9/20/2011 2:26:00 PM
Great work. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:42:00 PM
A very stirring write. Congratulations on your first place win. Well done
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratultions on the first place win in the contest of P.D., Fabiyas
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:55:00 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Fabiyas. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 10:42:00 AM
"Ears and tails always move, Ruminating rhythms of forest." "Each elephant longs I know: But chains kill the dreams." Powerful lines...loved it! CR
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:44:00 PM
INTERESTING WRITE
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Date: 4/10/2011 3:17:00 PM
Wow,you were very inspired and wrote an excellent poem, Fabiyas! Maybe one for the big soup contest!
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Date: 4/10/2011 12:21:00 PM
Your poem made me feel so sad Fabiyas. Animals deserve to roam in the wild. You described the elephants' plight so well. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/10/2011 9:35:00 AM
Fabiyas, I hate to think of elephants (or any other animals) in chains. No wonder their "eyes emit lava of pains." A sad but beautifully written poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2011 9:23:00 AM
This must be such a sight to behold, Fabiyas and I can't help but feel for those elephants-- that must be sad to see as well though-- thank you for sharing and for your inspiring comment in my poem :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:44:00 AM
FABIYAS .. an excellent write and description of the elephants ..so colorful and those chains seem sad to hold these lovely animals without freedom to roam... I was just thinking about u yesterday my friend and here u are commenting on my contest entry so sweetly.. yes yoga is a great source of inspiration and depth for life for me... hope to see and hear from u more and more luv.. happy Sunday..
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:08:00 AM
So terribly sad for these elephants, Fabiyas. Chained and imprisoned, as though they'd commited some dreadful crime.:( Elephants are so kind and family oriented...how they must pine for each other. You've painted a dismal scene, with you own kindness and concern. Blessings to you, Fabiyas. Mikki
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:04:00 AM
I enjoyed the sight and smell of kerala, Fabiyas. How are you? seen after a long time.
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Date: 4/10/2011 4:37:00 AM
truly delighted by this eloquent offering, fabiyas... awesome telling of your culture's intricacies! :) huggs, nette
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