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The Elements

One day Water said to Earth
“I ruled long before your birth,
I was here first, I hold the key,
Bow down to my seniority”
Earth replied to water with a laugh
“I paved my own path!
You may have been here first, it’s true,
But in the end my might bested you.”
The oceans swelled and roared
And the skies, they violently poured
As Water threatened to once again drown
So then Air jumped in with a frown
“Must you two always bicker?
This fuss will cause Fire to stir,
We all know what a bother he will be,
So please agree to disagree, peacefully!”
But the intervention came much too late
As Fire awoke with a blazing shake
“Who was here first, that’s no victory,
Not when there is a force as great as me!”
Fire began to swell with pride
Until Water doused him in her tide
Earth laughed with a great big rumble 
Filling Water with rocky crumble
Water replied with a great big wave
Leaving Earth’s garden naught but a grave
“My flowers! You have drown them all!
With that Earth shook down a great waterfall.
Water cried out, for she was undeniably vain
Without it she felt quite plain
Fire, still upset over the blow to his pride
Joined up and took Earth’s side
The three began to unleash their wrath 
Destroying much in their explosive path
Until Air decided that she had had enough
And she blew with one mighty puff
To pieces the Earth fell with a bash
And Water flew back with a crash
Fire shrunk into a tiny light
And Air took advantage from the break in the fight
“Why must you always try to be superior?
When we got along, things were merrier.
We work so much better 
When we work together!
Earth, you and Water pave the way
So the creatures of the world can live every day!
And Fire, you are needed just as much
Life would perish without your warm touch.”
Water ran smooth, feeling foolish
Such destruction was never her wish
Earth grew still similarly,
“I am so sorry,” said he.
Even Fire seemed to feel some shame
As he all but extinguished his flame
The elements worked together once more
Another quarrel added to the stories of lore

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  1. Date: 2/25/2012 2:37:00 PM
    this is very nice you remind me why i lovve wemen i am got my mine to do now but after i finish my zwolisder askwars.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 6:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kennedy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:13:00 AM
    And the conflict rages on. Enjoyed this poem mucho. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:05:00 AM
    This was a wery good work,all elements in one poem,well done Elizabeth. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 1:30:00 PM
    I found out that most people here don't take the time to read the longer poems. This is your first entry on this site, and it is a very impressive one. I hope more people get to read this one because they don't know what they are missing! Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here.

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Wow! This is some poem. You really said it like it is. Even the elements have get along. Thanks for sharing this great poem. Lucilla.