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The Earth's Core

I left the Earth and walked to the Moon passing the Sun. Along the way a Star I did meet full of treasures and fun. The Star had a story to tell so I listened carefully so keen. It told me of Earth’s history and mysteries setting a scene. There was a King a Queen a Prince and a princess before. Not born of Earth but of this Star that made plenty more. The Star buried them in the Earth’s core where they grew. It took years and years for this mixture to ferment a brew. In the Earth’s core were diamonds as big as Mountains. They sprung forth showers of fires like huge fountains. Under the diamonds was a huge magnet pulling the Star. They stayed together and worked as one to build a heart. So they gave the heart to the Queen and the princess. The King and the Prince were able to take a recess. They went on and built the dome around the Earth. But in the core lies a timely date for a new rebirth. So they grew and woke up and jobs were assigned. They had to gather the crops and all planets aligned. They had to dispense kingdom upon kingdom by a breath. They had to experience a multitude of life and one of death. But they hid treasures upon the whole Earth and stored. They sealed fate conquering life and death until bored. So one day they decided to go away leaving treasure. They’d build galaxies and more Stars hard to measure. They stayed together and lived happily ever after. Each with a skill and a talent cheerfully in laughter! ® Registered: Ann Rich 2006

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2009 10:25:00 AM
Hi Ann, this a superb and wonderful write. I like it. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:35:00 PM
Ann - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. This was such an imaginative story. Always, Daneann
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:29:00 AM
Congratulation on being featured today ... highest praise
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:10:00 PM
"Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:37:00 PM
This is filled with such wonderful images. Very well written. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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