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The Dream Maker

Eyelids dance in a world obscured Fabricating illusions we will seek Like the melody of an unforgettable song It's conception buried in the deep Visions of his eyes The tone of her skin Is the one they see a dream Or something clearly impinged His laugh and the curve of his lips Sun-touched highlights in her hair Are they fabled reveries or Unconscious aspects by which we compare She longed for his tender ways He wanted for her seducing dance A distant memory that was never lived A dream within a dream perchance We're looking for things we've never known In someone we've never met For this we cry and bow our knees A joining of halves that must connect And if by some miracle of fate These two dreamers paths do cross By no visible nor unseen force Could ever unjoint loves intercourse The Dream Maker In some majestic space resides The famed and masterful slumber illuminator Arranging the destiny of lives For Rick, the love of my life!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/6/2013 5:53:00 AM
- My words remain poor ..... I can only say ::::: BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:43:00 AM
My dear Anne-Lise, forgive me for being so behind on my reading. Thank you for you sweet comment, looking forward to seeing the beauty you have been creating lately. Your friendship means so much. Hugs XOXOX
Date: 12/5/2013 8:21:00 AM
He's a lucky guy to have inspired such emotion. A very romantic write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2013 1:35:00 AM
Sounds like a keeper. Blessings to you as well.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:40:00 AM
Thank you Richard, he does draw it out of me. Many blessings my new friend.
Date: 12/5/2013 6:04:00 AM
Interesting work..Fifth stanza first line reminds me of Scarlett in "Gone With The Wind" ..She had someone who really loved her but she was caught up in a fantasy which could never be and only found out too late..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visits..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2013 5:21:00 AM
Okay...Sara
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:38:00 AM
Sweet Sara... Funny you should mention Gone with the wind... My all time favorite movie :-) Love yours too. Hugs to you
Date: 12/4/2013 10:18:00 AM
Deeply & beautifully expressed. Such a shining heart.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:37:00 AM
Many thanks Sir Drake... Looking forward to your next. Hugs from the heart XOXOX
Date: 12/4/2013 7:41:00 AM
Hey Ho my dearest Sarai! Your Rick is a very very very lucky man... does my envy show??? LOL CREATIVE WRITE? Ohhhh Yaaaaah! Love you my sweet! XOXOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:34:00 AM
Oh sweet Jack... You are one of a kind! Thank you my dear sweet friend. XOXOX CUDDLY HUGS!
Date: 12/4/2013 7:08:00 AM
Hello Sarai, I loved this one, is niece .....Lekau
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/8/2013 12:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for stopping by Lekau. Thank you for your comment, so appreciated. Hugs
Date: 12/4/2013 6:07:00 AM
This is a lovely piece, Sarai. It touches on one of my favorite themes...dreams....You have weaved magic with this write.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/4/2013 6:14:00 AM
Greetings Eileen, many thanks for dropping by and your sweet sentiments. Have a beautiful day sweetie <3

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