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The Death of Winter

Grasped within the gentle breeze Winter fell, collapsed to knees And asked aloud to fallen trees If they would die as enemies And answered back the call of Spring, A small black bird began to sing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2015 3:21:00 AM
KAITLYN, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/2/2015 11:09:00 AM
Kaitlyn I am so pleased you tried the limerick- you have time to tweak a bit- you want to get the lines LONG/ LONG/ short/ short/LONG- 5 lines only. I am soup mailing you. Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/2/2015 11:11:00 AM
ut oh no soup mail! try to get the syllable count down to 9/9/7/7/9 if you need help I have a blog up on how to write limericks
Date: 3/1/2015 11:12:00 PM
Great write. I like the rhyming. #7
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