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The Dead Sea

i feel as if i am drowning gasping for air the dead float all around me and in moments i am engulfed drowned by the pain within me a pain worse than death the pain of being alone in a sea of the dead and still the wave of pain rises over my head

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Date: 4/5/2009 4:20:00 PM
Hi Chrisian! This write projects an overwhelming sense of sadness, and yes, "the pain of being alone".:( One can feel consumed by the death of whatever, or whomever. I hope all's well with you! At times Time seems to drag its heels, but I'm sure it will arrive and overtake your sadness. Best to you and yours! Mikki
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Date: 3/19/2009 11:35:00 AM
You go Girl, you certainly have a way with your words of choice that provide such clear images for your readers. Thank You for sharig your talent with all of us. Another wonderful poem Christian... MPK
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